Struggling, I Swim.
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Thanks for the heads up Billy, fixed.

Yeah, I know it's vague. I'm trying (and failing) to convey my emotions without giving anything away, I think I need to piece my poem together just as it's flying over a reader's head.

It's a delicate art.
You'll find out who I am within the imagery, it pleads 'fuck the metaphors and scream'
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Struggling, I Swim. - by Euan - 11-02-2013, 03:56 PM
RE: Struggling, I Swim. - by billy - 11-02-2013, 04:36 PM
RE: Struggling, I Swim. - by Euan - 11-02-2013, 05:28 PM
RE: Struggling, I Swim. - by milo - 11-03-2013, 12:23 AM
RE: Struggling, I Swim. - by tectak - 11-03-2013, 04:17 AM



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