11-01-2013, 10:57 AM
What I've always admired about your poetry is its effortless quality; it's essentially no different in structure to a lot of amateur stuff which lists images to create a cumulative effect, but you somehow make it work while others just bore me. The picture you've added to this is profoundly bleak and depressing, and the poem itself has an equal power. Thank you for the read.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe