10-31-2013, 03:29 AM
I liked the "false prophet" comparison. I think you can REALLY develop that image into something awesome. Besides that...meh. A break-up poem that's been written 10,000 times.
I also think you'll find that the people on this website frown upon capitalizing the first letter of each line. Only capitalize if it starts another sentence.
I also think you'll find that the people on this website frown upon capitalizing the first letter of each line. Only capitalize if it starts another sentence.
My name is Ozymandias, King of Kings:
Look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!
Look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!