10-30-2013, 02:31 AM
I can certainly relate to the poem...and so I like it 
"pure passion forged in fire" - fiery passion is way cliché.
"to fuel flames and heat higher" - sounds kind of forced. maybe just me.
The second stanza: LOVE it.
"pure passion forged in fire" - fiery passion is way cliché.
"to fuel flames and heat higher" - sounds kind of forced. maybe just me.
The second stanza: LOVE it.
My name is Ozymandias, King of Kings:
Look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!
Look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!