From Outside a New Light
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(08-29-2013, 11:57 AM)timothylocke Wrote:  The song draweth nigh, draweth nigh and doth seem out of place with the rest of the work
for the singer doth deceive
A pedestal or a throne
for a basket without weave i like
To each seller is himself
Each himself to be sold
two penny for your strife,
all silver for half gold
Along and long tithe
since the river gave gain
A dark shift that drives on
a soft shadow through the rain
From ashes to ashes
For we all must fall down pretty cliché. but maybe it works here...
A slim glance at king's eye
A fist curled for king's crown this is cool
an interesting read, but I really think you should clear things up. It's hard to discern a thing. a little ambiguity can be good...but this is impossible to interpret.
My name is Ozymandias, King of Kings:
Look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!
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From Outside a New Light - by timothylocke - 08-29-2013, 11:57 AM
RE: From Outside a New Light - by Malu - 10-18-2013, 05:32 AM
RE: From Outside a New Light - by jdeirmend - 10-27-2013, 11:28 AM
RE: From Outside a New Light - by priya - 10-28-2013, 11:27 AM
RE: From Outside a New Light - by ThePinsir - 10-28-2013, 10:12 PM
RE: From Outside a New Light - by johannat - 10-29-2013, 08:28 AM
RE: From Outside a New Light - by Graystar - 11-05-2013, 05:34 PM



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