Leaking buttons

[SirBrendan]

I like it and I think I got some of the lines. Like others though, i sometimes got lost and didn't know what a passage was, which as a reader makes me almost defensive. This is just an idea, but maybe you could add a simple structure change by outright stating what the action is. What I mean is, for example

"Folding books into skulls-- I read
leaving eyeprints on ceilings-- I think
...
carving pennies out of scotch-- I lose
jumping into pockets of neon light-- myself
....
watering Gods video games-- I live."

I think that could make your words more accessible. It could be a terrible idea, but I hope if it doesn't work, it at least helps. Either way, I appreciate the weirdness and boldness of what you put out here