Simon in the Land of Chalk Outlines (Revision 3)

Hello There, Guest! Register

WILL ALL MEMBERS PLEASE GIVE FEEDBACK BEFORE POSTING A POEM IN ANY OF THE MAIN WORKSHOPS.

Simon in the Land of Chalk Outlines (Revision 3)

Todd Offline

Offline

Empty Suit

Posts: 2,357
Threads: 230
Joined: Oct 2010

#21

10-28-2013, 08:13 PM (This post was last modified: 10-28-2013, 08:17 PM by Todd.)

New revision up after Jenn's comments. Still not there, but hopefully closer to my intent.

The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson

Reply

« Next Oldest | Next Newest »

Messages In This Thread

Simon in the Land of Chalk Outlines (Revision 3) - by Todd - 10-02-2013, 09:21 AM

RE: Simon in the Land of Chalk Outlines (Revision) - by Erthona - 10-02-2013, 01:24 PM

RE: Simon in the Land of Chalk Outlines (Revision) - by Todd - 10-02-2013, 01:41 PM

RE: Simon in the Land of Chalk Outlines (Revision) - by bena - 10-02-2013, 02:22 PM

RE: Simon in the Land of Chalk Outlines (Revision) - by Erthona - 10-02-2013, 05:01 PM

RE: Simon in the Land of Chalk Outlines (Revision) - by ChristopherSea - 10-02-2013, 08:15 PM

RE: Simon in the Land of Chalk Outlines (Revision) - by bena - 10-02-2013, 10:45 PM

RE: Simon in the Land of Chalk Outlines (Revision) - by ChristopherSea - 10-02-2013, 10:49 PM

RE: Simon in the Land of Chalk Outlines (Revision) - by Erthona - 10-03-2013, 12:29 AM

RE: Simon in the Land of Chalk Outlines (Revision) - by ChristopherSea - 10-03-2013, 12:36 AM

RE: Simon in the Land of Chalk Outlines (Revision) - by milo - 10-03-2013, 12:45 AM

RE: Simon in the Land of Chalk Outlines (Revision) - by bena - 10-03-2013, 12:42 AM

RE: Simon in the Land of Chalk Outlines (Revision) - by ChristopherSea - 10-03-2013, 12:45 AM

RE: Simon in the Land of Chalk Outlines (Revision) - by Todd - 10-04-2013, 11:26 AM

RE: Simon in the Land of Chalk Outlines (Revision) - by ChristopherSea - 10-04-2013, 07:26 PM

RE: Simon in the Land of Chalk Outlines (Revision) - by Todd - 10-04-2013, 08:39 PM

RE: Simon in the Land of Chalk Outlines (Revision) - by ChristopherSea - 10-04-2013, 08:51 PM

RE: Simon in the Land of Chalk Outlines (Revision 2) - by Todd - 10-28-2013, 07:59 AM

RE: Simon in the Land of Chalk Outlines (Revision 2) - by tigrflye - 10-28-2013, 12:16 PM

RE: Simon in the Land of Chalk Outlines (Revision 2) - by Todd - 10-28-2013, 12:51 PM

RE: Simon in the Land of Chalk Outlines (Revision 3) - by Todd - 10-28-2013, 08:13 PM

RE: Simon in the Land of Chalk Outlines (Revision 3) - by trueenigma - 11-03-2013, 05:13 PM

RE: Simon in the Land of Chalk Outlines (Revision 3) - by milo - 11-04-2013, 08:49 AM

RE: Simon in the Land of Chalk Outlines (Revision 3) - by Todd - 11-06-2013, 06:56 AM

Users browsing this thread: 1 Guest(s)