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grey puddle (haiku)
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10-28-2013, 07:13 PM
Hey, it's a real Haiku, I think. I really like the moth image! Lepidoptera are my favorite insects. My only suggestion with this one is to possibly re-examine 'ticking'. Although it goes well with the wing, it is harder to associate with the puddle. Unfortunately, I can't think of a substitute on the fly. Gina, see what you and others think./Chris
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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grey puddle (haiku) - by emerald13 - 10-28-2013, 02:15 PM
RE: grey puddle (haiku) - by ChristopherSea - 10-28-2013, 07:13 PM
RE: grey puddle (haiku) - by Keaner222 - 11-04-2013, 12:56 PM
RE: grey puddle (haiku) - by billy - 11-04-2013, 01:36 PM
RE: grey puddle (haiku) - by trailertrash - 12-09-2013, 09:10 AM
RE: grey puddle (haiku) - by beaufort - 12-10-2013, 08:07 AM
RE: grey puddle (haiku) - by John Galt - 03-17-2014, 02:39 AM
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