Short Story: Merlin and the Dragon Queen chapter 1

[milo]

milo, I enjoyed the story. I will read it about another 5 times over the next few days, and then hope to come back with comments.

Best,

Todd

Thanks Todd, I am posting chapter 2 as well this week, but going forward I intend to post 1 chapter a week. I appreciate any comments you can add to improve them. ( I just went through a quick edit and found at least 10 errors)