Simon in the Land of Chalk Outlines (Revision 3)
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Thanks Jenn, I see about four minor corrections and one major one. I'm going to reassert pure 4-3-4-3 for rhythm and to fix key lines. The refrains will be altered slightly for the meter as necessary.

Best,

Todd
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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RE: Simon in the Land of Chalk Outlines (Revision 2) - by tigrflye - 10-28-2013, 12:16 PM
RE: Simon in the Land of Chalk Outlines (Revision 2) - by Todd - 10-28-2013, 12:51 PM



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