10-27-2013, 08:06 PM
(10-27-2013, 07:44 PM)Todd Wrote: Scooby Doo: Fred the leader of the gang, not Flintstone.Ok! That lends a whole different light to the poem.
As much as I grew up on SD, I had no idea of Shaggy's name, first or last.
That I didn't get any of this points to at least two possibilities:
1. I'm a lousy, inattentive reader, or
2. You could stand to put in maybe a single more obvious clue as to the source from which you're drawing. Mention something that can't be mistaken: the mystery machine, another character (velma, daphne, etc.)
I leave it to you to conclude what's what, but the truth is probably somewhere between these two possibilities.
“Poetry is mother-tongue of the human race; as gardening is older than agriculture; painting than writing; song than declamation; parables,—than deductions; barter,—than trade”
― Johann Hamann
― Johann Hamann