(Revision 2) The Existential Crisis of Norville "Shaggy" Rogers
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(Revision 2) The Existential Crisis of Norville "Shaggy" Rogers
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10-27-2013, 06:48 PM
Let me ask you, does the poem work better if I do this to the opening (thinking about your point):
Life isn't an appetite to fill, but a mystery to solve. I actually think it does, and it surprises me that I didn't see it. Thanks, Todd
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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(Revision 2) The Existential Crisis of Norville "Shaggy" Rogers - by Todd - 10-26-2013, 10:58 AM
RE: The Existential Crisis of Norville "Shaggy" Rogers - by jdeirmend - 10-27-2013, 04:24 PM
RE: The Existential Crisis of Norville "Shaggy" Rogers - by Todd - 10-27-2013, 06:48 PM
RE: (Revision) The Existential Crisis of Norville "Shaggy" Rogers - by jdeirmend - 10-27-2013, 07:39 PM
RE: (Revision) The Existential Crisis of Norville "Shaggy" Rogers - by Todd - 10-27-2013, 07:44 PM
RE: (Revision) The Existential Crisis of Norville "Shaggy" Rogers - by jdeirmend - 10-27-2013, 08:06 PM
RE: (Revision) The Existential Crisis of Norville "Shaggy" Rogers - by Todd - 10-27-2013, 08:17 PM
RE: (Revision) The Existential Crisis of Norville "Shaggy" Rogers - by jdeirmend - 10-27-2013, 08:43 PM
RE: (Revision) The Existential Crisis of Norville "Shaggy" Rogers - by Todd - 10-27-2013, 08:59 PM
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