The Check-Out

[Todd]

Hi Jenn,

I'm still trying to think how you can make the man obviously blind without calling out a white cane, because that would be an ironic twist.

I know I already commented on the edit above, but I noticed your discussion in the line thread. I actually like the long length of the lines in this one. I don't know if it would be served breaking this like one might a free verse poem. If milo takes up the challenge and comes up with something great. I just wouldn't be too quick to shorten those lines.

Just an opinion of course.

Best,

Todd