So, I Failed your Rorschach Test

[milo]

Your rapid fire editing process is entertaining. You clearly enjoy writing (and workshopping)

Why not break on conform instead of must I?

In everything,
why must I conform

Or

In everything, why must I conform

It presents a nice entendre, does it not?

Also, why no comma before cryptic?

But take some time and think about it. I don't want to be the one who screwed up your poem

Too late.