10-27-2013, 03:59 AM
Your rapid fire editing process is entertaining. You clearly enjoy writing (and workshopping)
Why not break on conform instead of must I?
In everything,
why must I conform
Or
In everything, why must I conform
It presents a nice entendre, does it not?
Also, why no comma before cryptic?
But take some time and think about it. I don't want to be the one who screwed up your poem
Why not break on conform instead of must I?
In everything,
why must I conform
Or
In everything, why must I conform
It presents a nice entendre, does it not?
Also, why no comma before cryptic?
But take some time and think about it. I don't want to be the one who screwed up your poem