The Waters Drag me
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(10-26-2013, 11:36 PM)Euan Wrote:  I'm not sure Milo, do you believe the line breaks are inadequate?
It reads like you weren't sure. Line breaks are pretty important in free verse. The ones are disorienting.
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The Waters Drag me - by Euan - 10-26-2013, 10:55 PM
RE: The Waters Drag me - by milo - 10-26-2013, 11:24 PM
RE: The Waters Drag me - by Euan - 10-26-2013, 11:36 PM
RE: The Waters Drag me - by milo - 10-26-2013, 11:41 PM
RE: The Waters Drag me - by jdeirmend - 10-26-2013, 11:36 PM
RE: The Waters Drag me - by Todd - 10-26-2013, 11:44 PM
RE: The Waters Drag me - by Euan - 10-26-2013, 11:46 PM
RE: The Waters Drag me - by SirBrendan - 10-27-2013, 01:02 AM
RE: The Waters Drag me - by milo - 10-27-2013, 01:45 AM
RE: The Waters Drag me - by Euan - 10-27-2013, 06:56 AM



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