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Ship of Fools
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10-26-2013, 04:55 AM
(10-25-2013, 04:31 AM)ChristopherSea Wrote: Dope christened vesselExcellent short poem. The only thing that threw me was the "Dope" reference, which where I am from always refers to hashish, but seemingly it can refer to any drug but mostly of golden brown variety. Nice wordplay with vein. No crit to offer, it's perfect as it is. Thanks, Mark  wae aye man ye radgie |
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Ship of Fools - by ChristopherSea - 10-25-2013, 04:31 AM
RE: Ship of Fools - by Douglaspocock - 10-25-2013, 05:53 PM
RE: Ship of Fools - by ChristopherSea - 10-25-2013, 06:41 PM
RE: Ship of Fools - by Magpie - 10-26-2013, 04:55 AM
RE: Ship of Fools - by ChristopherSea - 10-26-2013, 05:07 AM
RE: Ship of Fools - by emerald13 - 10-27-2013, 07:54 AM
RE: Ship of Fools - by billy - 10-27-2013, 11:03 AM
RE: Ship of Fools - by ChristopherSea - 10-28-2013, 12:12 AM
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