So, I Failed your Rorschach Test

[ChristopherSea]

Todd, much obliged as always for your guidance and critique. I like the idea of co-joining the title with the opening stanza as well as some of the ideas for restructing the conform/norm stanza. I was thinking that I needed some red to stretch the neoplasticism art movement theme through all of those black and white stripes. However, I don't need spilling the blood too early as to weaken the climax. An interesting side bar to this poem is my fascination with the band 'White Stripes' and their black, white and red album themes as they relate to neo-plasticism and the Dutch De Stijl art wave of the 1920's (the name-sake of one of their albums as well). So, I am glad that you appreciated that stanza. I shall get to that edit soon. Cheers, my comrade in pen, and thanks a metric tonne!/Chris