First "Italian" Sonnet

[milo]

^ very insightful observations. I know I'm bad about "padding" and I'm working on the archaic part. That's just a bad habit, really.

thanks for taking the time to type all that out.

(googling "modern sonnets")

I would check out some right on this board.

Actually, if you want to read some nice modern sonnets made by poets just screwing around, check here:

http://www.pigpenpoetry.com/showthread.php?tid=9294&highlight=iamb

http://www.pigpenpoetry.com/showthread.php?tid=9299&highlight=iamb

http://www.pigpenpoetry.com/showthread.php?tid=9300&highlight=iamb