"The right way"

[ellajam]

I am not disregarding what the crits r saying at all, I'm not sayin I am better good or even novice, I'm not even saying I'm happy, I'm simply lost in life and these words n potry n music the take me away from reality. So with respect I'm saying that what drives me to do this is not the perfection but more of a reflection on my lack of acceptance to the way things r I'm still young naive and findinf myself. I'm not trying to insult anyones passion for this beautiful thing we as creatires created many years ago so, or convince anyone that the right way is the wrong way, I'm simply expressing myself in this dark time of mine. The crits are absolutely right if this was poetry school I would be miserably failing but its not poetry school, maybe I'm posting in the wrong area or something but I'm here to post and read and interact with emotions of people of never been much of a literate but I do enjoy seeing expression and expression myself. This whatever it maybe called is again just that.I'm not trying to make enemies or down talk anybody on there work or rebel against anyone who discredits my work. I'm just trying to surrond myself with passionate people and in turn show I am as well passionate, although not correctly.

Hi, ehab, I think you're missing a great opportunity here. You've stumbled across a site where people generously give their time and expertise to those of us trying to express ourselves but finding our words often come out too muddled to be heard.

Starting with something fairly short and simple, you can learn here how to shape the words so that what you are trying to say comes through.

Learning to edit is also a great escape from everyday reality. It takes concentration to absorb and apply the comments given here, a great respite from whatever else might be on your mind.

Works for me.