10-26-2013, 01:26 AM
(10-23-2013, 11:37 AM)bena Wrote: WOW. What the hell could I say to improve this? You brought me straight into the mind of someone with mental disease and it hurt me, effected me, gave me chills. What more could you ask for in a poem? Brilliant work.Hi mel
mel.
Many thanks for your kind words I think some lines are a little cliche so I will perhaps give them some more though but I am really encouraged by your comments, many thanks Keith
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