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First "Italian" Sonnet

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10-26-2013, 12:41 AM

^ I really like the "unfurled" idea. Version 2.1 Coming right up Smile

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OP updated with version 2.1

I hope the "è" doesn't make it seem archaic; I used it because it helps tremendously with the meter.

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First "Italian" Sonnet - by ThePinsir - 10-24-2013, 04:15 AM

RE: First "Italian" Sonnet - by heslopian - 10-24-2013, 07:12 AM

RE: First "Italian" Sonnet - by Todd - 10-24-2013, 07:19 AM

RE: First "Italian" Sonnet - by ThePinsir - 10-24-2013, 10:08 PM

RE: First "Italian" Sonnet - by billy - 10-25-2013, 07:57 AM

RE: First "Italian" Sonnet - by billy - 10-24-2013, 12:02 PM

RE: First "Italian" Sonnet - by jdeirmend - 10-24-2013, 11:51 PM

RE: First "Italian" Sonnet - by tectak - 10-25-2013, 08:34 AM

RE: First "Italian" Sonnet - by tigrflye - 10-25-2013, 11:00 AM

RE: First "Italian" Sonnet - by ThePinsir - 10-25-2013, 11:53 PM

RE: First "Italian" Sonnet - by Todd - 10-26-2013, 12:27 AM

RE: First "Italian" Sonnet - by ThePinsir - 10-26-2013, 12:41 AM

RE: First "Italian" Sonnet - by milo - 10-26-2013, 02:36 AM

RE: First "Italian" Sonnet - by ThePinsir - 10-26-2013, 04:37 AM

RE: First "Italian" Sonnet - by ThePinsir - 10-26-2013, 02:49 AM

RE: First "Italian" Sonnet - by milo - 10-26-2013, 03:11 AM

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