First "Italian" Sonnet
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Version 2.0 in the OP. Guys, thanks SOOOO much for your feedback!
I played around a bit with enjambment, tried to get rid of some wordiness, and tried to deviate from STRICT i.p.

You guys are awesome.
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First "Italian" Sonnet - by ThePinsir - 10-24-2013, 04:15 AM
RE: First "Italian" Sonnet - by heslopian - 10-24-2013, 07:12 AM
RE: First "Italian" Sonnet - by Todd - 10-24-2013, 07:19 AM
RE: First "Italian" Sonnet - by ThePinsir - 10-24-2013, 10:08 PM
RE: First "Italian" Sonnet - by billy - 10-25-2013, 07:57 AM
RE: First "Italian" Sonnet - by billy - 10-24-2013, 12:02 PM
RE: First "Italian" Sonnet - by jdeirmend - 10-24-2013, 11:51 PM
RE: First "Italian" Sonnet - by tectak - 10-25-2013, 08:34 AM
RE: First "Italian" Sonnet - by tigrflye - 10-25-2013, 11:00 AM
RE: First "Italian" Sonnet - by ThePinsir - 10-25-2013, 11:53 PM
RE: First "Italian" Sonnet - by Todd - 10-26-2013, 12:27 AM
RE: First "Italian" Sonnet - by ThePinsir - 10-26-2013, 12:41 AM
RE: First "Italian" Sonnet - by milo - 10-26-2013, 02:36 AM
RE: First "Italian" Sonnet - by ThePinsir - 10-26-2013, 04:37 AM
RE: First "Italian" Sonnet - by ThePinsir - 10-26-2013, 02:49 AM
RE: First "Italian" Sonnet - by milo - 10-26-2013, 03:11 AM



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