Anywhere But Home

[Euan]

While this piece is filled with errors, structured poorly and the tense of the poem changes unintentionally I rather enjoyed this. You've some unique phrasing and word play, some of these lines are pretty damn good. What you need to do is effectively and appropriately use punctuation, strip apart the helper words and get to the essence of the potential you have here.

That's it put simply to you, There is some damn good shit packed in here, strip apart the rough, and you'll have your diamond.