The Check-Out

The Check-Out

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10-25-2013, 12:31 PM

(10-25-2013, 11:35 AM)FatalBanana Wrote: This is well written and I really enjoyed the brutal honesty. Well done

This is a good start, but we need more specifics in serious critique. Please elaborate more on the poem. /admin

The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson

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The Check-Out - by tigrflye - 10-25-2013, 11:09 AM

RE: The Check-Out - by FatalBanana - 10-25-2013, 11:35 AM

RE: The Check-Out - by Todd - 10-25-2013, 12:31 PM

RE: The Check-Out - by tigrflye - 10-26-2013, 12:18 PM

RE: The Check-Out - by Todd - 10-25-2013, 10:28 PM

RE: The Check-Out - by RyanRader13 - 10-26-2013, 12:59 AM

RE: The Check-Out - by Todd - 10-26-2013, 11:25 AM

RE: The Check-Out - by Todd - 10-27-2013, 10:00 AM

RE: The Check-Out - by billy - 10-27-2013, 10:59 AM

RE: The Check-Out - by Todd - 10-27-2013, 11:09 AM

RE: The Check-Out - by tigrflye - 10-27-2013, 12:07 PM

RE: The Check-Out - by billy - 10-27-2013, 05:45 PM

RE: The Check-Out - by Todd - 10-27-2013, 07:09 PM

RE: The Check-Out - by tigrflye - 10-27-2013, 08:15 PM

RE: The Check-Out - by Todd - 10-28-2013, 10:04 AM

RE: The Check-Out - by tigrflye - 10-28-2013, 11:21 AM

RE: The Check-Out - by billy - 10-29-2013, 09:24 AM

RE: The Check-Out - by Todd - 10-29-2013, 11:39 AM

RE: The Check-Out - by tigrflye - 10-29-2013, 12:29 PM

RE: The Check-Out - by billy - 10-29-2013, 12:39 PM

RE: The Check-Out - by tigrflye - 10-29-2013, 12:41 PM

RE: The Check-Out - by Todd - 10-29-2013, 12:46 PM

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