The Check-Out
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Edit 2.7 (milo/todd/billy/chris/ryan)

Her short black skirt was inches from
revealing more than thigh,
while bent to find the coins she dropped. 
His mouth betrayed a sigh,

enough hot breath to fog a glass. 
It made a sickness stem
inside my chest to spy his eyes 
attack the flimsy hem. 

A sudden smirk appeared, she turned 
and accidentally pressed 
her overflowing bosom up 
against my husband's chest.

My jaw unhinged. I thought my bulging
eyes could take no more.
That's when he had audacity
to touch that filthy whore. 

Their giggles burst a vessel somewhere
deep inside my brain. 
I twirled to face a gentleman,
leading with his cane,

"My husband likes to flirt; I know
he thinks I shouldn't mind.
I'm wondering if, for revenge,
you'd like to fuck me blind?"


Edit 1((chris/todd/ryan Thank you))

Her short black skirt was inches from revealing more than thigh,
while bent to find the coins she dropped. His mouth betrayed a sigh,
enough hot breath to fog a glass. It made a sickness stem
inside my chest to spy his eyes attack the flimsy hem.
A nasty smirk appeared, she turned and accidentally pressed
her overflowing bosom up against my husband's chest.
My jaw unhinged. I thought my bulging eyes could take no more.
That's when he had audacity to touch that filthy whore.
Their giggling burst a vessel somewhere deep inside my brain.
I twirled to face a gentleman, leaning on his cane,
"My husband likes to flirt with every harlot he can find.
I'm wondering if, for revenge, you'd like to fuck me blind?"

Original:

Her short black skirt was inches from revealing more than thigh,
while bent to find the coins she dropped. His mouth betrayed a sigh;
enough hot breath to fog a glass. It made a sickness stem
inside my chest to spy his eyes attack the flimsy hem.
A nasty smirk appeared, she turned and accidently pressed
her overflowing bosom up against my husband's chest.
My jaw unhinged. I thought my bulging eyes could take no more.
That's when he had audacity to touch that filthy whore.
Their giggling burst a vessel somewhere deep inside my brain.
I twirled to face a gentleman, leaning on his cane,
"My husband's game to flirt with just whatever he can find.
I'm wondering if, for revenge, you'd like to fuck me blind?"
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Messages In This Thread
The Check-Out - by tigrflye - 10-25-2013, 11:09 AM
RE: The Check-Out - by FatalBanana - 10-25-2013, 11:35 AM
RE: The Check-Out - by Todd - 10-25-2013, 12:31 PM
RE: The Check-Out - by ChristopherSea - 10-25-2013, 07:52 PM
RE: The Check-Out - by tigrflye - 10-26-2013, 12:18 PM
RE: The Check-Out - by Todd - 10-25-2013, 10:28 PM
RE: The Check-Out - by RyanRader13 - 10-26-2013, 12:59 AM
RE: The Check-Out - by Todd - 10-26-2013, 11:25 AM
RE: The Check-Out - by Todd - 10-27-2013, 10:00 AM
RE: The Check-Out - by billy - 10-27-2013, 10:59 AM
RE: The Check-Out - by Todd - 10-27-2013, 11:09 AM
RE: The Check-Out - by tigrflye - 10-27-2013, 12:07 PM
RE: The Check-Out - by billy - 10-27-2013, 05:45 PM
RE: The Check-Out - by Todd - 10-27-2013, 07:09 PM
RE: The Check-Out - by tigrflye - 10-27-2013, 08:15 PM
RE: The Check-Out - by Todd - 10-28-2013, 10:04 AM
RE: The Check-Out - by tigrflye - 10-28-2013, 11:21 AM
RE: The Check-Out - by billy - 10-29-2013, 09:24 AM
RE: The Check-Out - by Todd - 10-29-2013, 11:39 AM
RE: The Check-Out - by tigrflye - 10-29-2013, 12:29 PM
RE: The Check-Out - by billy - 10-29-2013, 12:39 PM
RE: The Check-Out - by tigrflye - 10-29-2013, 12:41 PM
RE: The Check-Out - by Todd - 10-29-2013, 12:46 PM



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