One girl and her dog

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One girl and her dog

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10-23-2013, 11:37 AM

WOW. What the hell could I say to improve this? You brought me straight into the mind of someone with mental disease and it hurt me, effected me, gave me chills. What more could you ask for in a poem? Brilliant work.

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One girl and her dog - by Keith - 10-23-2013, 08:04 AM

RE: Moving home - by bena - 10-23-2013, 11:37 AM

RE: Moving home - by Keith - 10-26-2013, 01:26 AM

RE: Moving home - by Euan - 10-26-2013, 01:34 AM

RE: One girl and her dog - by Keith - 11-04-2013, 08:15 AM

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