the dark ocean that is my mind
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(10-23-2013, 05:29 AM)ehabuncensored Wrote:  Poetry is a weird thing it deservez no critque it deserves no perfection or editing. This is a perfect poem because it is a emotion I picture this person in this place I picture feelinv these things I pictured that u painted with words. N I realize I'm just lookin at a screen. This is a percect poem. For real
This view is ill-informed, and has no place in a workshop. Philosophically, you will not be happy here. /admin
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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the dark ocean that is my mind - by minear - 07-20-2013, 05:01 PM
RE: the dark ocean that is my mind - by Malu - 10-18-2013, 08:44 AM
RE: the dark ocean that is my mind - by viviencherylin - 10-22-2013, 09:56 AM
RE: the dark ocean that is my mind - by tectak - 10-22-2013, 11:25 PM
RE: the dark ocean that is my mind - by ThePinsir - 10-23-2013, 12:51 AM
RE: the dark ocean that is my mind - by tectak - 10-23-2013, 03:42 AM
RE: the dark ocean that is my mind - by Todd - 10-23-2013, 05:43 AM
RE: the dark ocean that is my mind - by MpoemsR - 11-03-2013, 04:00 PM



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