the dark ocean that is my mind

the dark ocean that is my mind

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10-23-2013, 12:51 AM

Did you exclude punctuation on purpose? I think decent punctuation will make the whole work read a bit better.

My name is Ozymandias, King of Kings:
Look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!

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the dark ocean that is my mind - by minear - 07-20-2013, 05:01 PM

RE: the dark ocean that is my mind - by viviencherylin - 10-22-2013, 09:56 AM

RE: the dark ocean that is my mind - by ThePinsir - 10-23-2013, 12:51 AM

RE: the dark ocean that is my mind - by MpoemsR - 11-03-2013, 04:00 PM

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