10-22-2013, 09:56 PM
I think this is a pretty cool project Todd, one that you can continue to work with and produce multiple excerpts for. I actually found the psychiatrist's notes more intriguing than the patient's poetic communique. Nonetheless, I am attracted to the Lewis Carrol references. I don't have a lot of advice for you after one read. This will take some study to properly critique!
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris