Atlas Shrugged (Edit #1)

Atlas Shrugged (Edit #1)

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10-21-2013, 10:42 AM

(10-21-2013, 09:56 AM)Shoug Wrote: This is fucking amazing. You effortlessly weave in spades and spades of internal and external rhyme while maintaining super simple language. Great!

This will never do as critique. Try harder/ admin

It could be worse

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Atlas Shrugged (Edit #1) - by Viktor Vaughn - 10-21-2013, 03:21 AM

RE: Atlas Shrugged - by Shoug - 10-21-2013, 09:56 AM

RE: Atlas Shrugged - by Todd - 10-21-2013, 10:39 AM

RE: Atlas Shrugged - by Leanne - 10-21-2013, 10:42 AM

RE: Atlas Shrugged - by billy - 10-21-2013, 10:45 AM

RE: Atlas Shrugged - by Viktor Vaughn - 10-21-2013, 11:50 AM

RE: Atlas Shrugged - by billy - 10-21-2013, 12:00 PM

RE: Atlas Shrugged (Edit #1) - by Viktor Vaughn - 10-23-2013, 07:54 AM

RE: Atlas Shrugged (Edit #1) - by billy - 10-23-2013, 08:21 AM

RE: Atlas Shrugged (Edit #1) - by SirBrendan - 10-23-2013, 09:22 PM

RE: Atlas Shrugged (Edit #1) - by Todd - 10-23-2013, 09:29 PM

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