The Blue Belle

[Keith]

sense you posted this in for fun I will refrain from much critique. But I just wanted to take the time to let you know that I really enjoyed this poem. You did a great job on painting the picture of where we are, and whats going on, and I felt a strong sense of emotional connection to this piece for some particular reason.
keep up the good work!
-gritdog

Thanks for the encouragement Gritdog much appreciated. Keith

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Hi keith, nice.
As once upon a time biker chick. found lots to connect with.
The same old story and parts played out between the pubs...football ...rugby
My only coment was the football line might need some thought on punctuation to smooth it out. (The game, the ball or many footballs are lost?)

all the best AJ.

Thanks for the feedback AJ I still have a bike but its nearly as old as me. I should have guessed and remember once a biker chick always a biker chick You have picked out my least happy line I didn't want football as it doesn't really fit. I will have a think. Cheers Keith