10-20-2013, 04:22 AM
Hi there Intricate B!
Poems about a subject as deep as suicide can often be very moving and intriguing, if they're written correctly. I think the poem would be better if the word suicide wasn't actually in it. This way the reader would actually have to think about the poem and it's meaning, rather than having it written so blatantly. I would try rewording it a little bit to, but the idea is definitely there!
Poems about a subject as deep as suicide can often be very moving and intriguing, if they're written correctly. I think the poem would be better if the word suicide wasn't actually in it. This way the reader would actually have to think about the poem and it's meaning, rather than having it written so blatantly. I would try rewording it a little bit to, but the idea is definitely there!