The Blue Belle
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Hi keith, nice.
As once upon a time biker chick Big Grin found lots to connect with.
The same old story and parts played out between the pubs...football SadAngry...rugby SmileThumbsup
My only coment was the football line might need some thought on punctuation to smooth it out. (The game, the ball or many footballs are lost?)

all the best AJ.
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The Blue Belle - by Keith - 10-19-2013, 08:42 AM
RE: The Blue Belle - by Gritdog - 10-19-2013, 11:41 AM
RE: The Blue Belle - by Keith - 10-21-2013, 08:22 AM
RE: The Blue Belle - by cidermaid - 10-19-2013, 03:49 PM
RE: The Blue Belle - by billy - 10-21-2013, 08:50 AM
RE: The Blue Belle - by Keith - 10-21-2013, 10:44 AM



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