10-19-2013, 11:41 AM
sense you posted this in for fun I will refrain from much critique. But I just wanted to take the time to let you know that I really enjoyed this poem. You did a great job on painting the picture of where we are, and whats going on, and I felt a strong sense of emotional connection to this piece for some particular reason.
keep up the good work!
-gritdog
keep up the good work!
-gritdog

