Insanity

[FayandFire]

Insanity now- a -days have become 1 with humanity
,and our friend morals well he has lost his very gravity
But Insanity is steadily grabbing we
, but we still nourish the deep pains
Often thinking we have ………. Well that we have gained our true friend sanity,but in fact its ( Maybe make that a seperate line

more delusions never sanity
,from our very own friend insanity

Hello Poetborn, My best advice is to take in what Malu says. Also i was curious about the commas to. What was your purpose behind them? If you dont mind me asking.