10-17-2013, 01:44 AM 
	
	
	
		I really like this one just the way it is. I think it gets  straight to the heart of suicide.
I am just learning about titling. I never thought of using it as such an integral part of the poem, or realized it was okay to leave what it says out of the body of the poem.
Thanks. 
	
	
	
I am just learning about titling. I never thought of using it as such an integral part of the poem, or realized it was okay to leave what it says out of the body of the poem.
Thanks.
 
	
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