while the subject matter is pretty dramatic, (what could be more dramatic than thinking about topping oneself?)
it feels to angsty and to over the top (i never take a poem as the truth so i have no idea if it's true/real or not, not do i need to) poems about about this subject should have me thinking WTF did i just read, at the end of it. it should fuck me up emotionally. it doesn't. it reads as a suicide poem trying to be a suicide poem and failing.
it feels to angsty and to over the top (i never take a poem as the truth so i have no idea if it's true/real or not, not do i need to) poems about about this subject should have me thinking WTF did i just read, at the end of it. it should fuck me up emotionally. it doesn't. it reads as a suicide poem trying to be a suicide poem and failing.