Suicide Number 10,214,213,134

[Malu]

Too late I have partaken of Amanita phalloi...des. I told you I was..The End

First in a series of innovative poems from the dark side...or perhaps, the last. This last part just seemed like a joke (as in the attempt and effort, obviously not the subject matter). First or last, because my poems are dark and about suicide, that'll leave them wanting more. Not really.

It's only poetry, folks. There you go!

All I did was take what you wrote and delete the returns. Looks like just one, barely/hardly two sentence(s) that would sound normal with better grammar. "Too late, I have partaken of Amanita phalloides, I told you I was. The end." Not sure why you drew out the word phalloides, maybe that was supposed to be some hesitation, the final thought before it's all over. I guess they call it death cap for a reason.