10-14-2013, 04:49 PM
It sounds like a "a multiple choice quiz..."
I'll choose none of the above.
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I think you need to do a little more than make a list.
Maybe you should read some real poems, instead of song lyrics if you want to write poetry. I am assuming yo are getting this from song lyrics, because no poetry I am familiar with resembles this, but I have unfortunately seen song lyrics that do.
Sorry, but there is just nothing here to critique. The best I can offer is what Tom advised, reload and try again.
Dale
I'll choose none of the above.
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I think you need to do a little more than make a list.
Maybe you should read some real poems, instead of song lyrics if you want to write poetry. I am assuming yo are getting this from song lyrics, because no poetry I am familiar with resembles this, but I have unfortunately seen song lyrics that do.
Sorry, but there is just nothing here to critique. The best I can offer is what Tom advised, reload and try again.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.