Poem about society; need help finishing?

[tectak]

PLEASE HELP I DONT KNOW HOW TO END MY POEM?? OR WHAT TO TITLE IT!

We are told to be
Intellectual
Logical
Cynical
Practical
Sensible
(blind)

We are told to trust
Society
Knowledge
History
Religion
Science
(madness)

We are taught to be
Reasonable
Responsible
Clinical
Rational
Digital
(lifeless)

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Also, the words 'Blind', 'Madness' and 'Lifeless' were supposed to be indented, i guess the formatting didnt work out

Hi selma.
You should call this "The Logical Song" as it has already been written and so named, released as a track by Supertramp way back. If it is in a song it is probably a cliche...if it IS a song it is DEFINITELY a cliche. How to end it? Put it in the bin and write something new . There are plenty of words already in the dictionary so there is no need to compile another list
Keep writing,
Best,
tectak
The Logical Song
When I was young it seemed that life was so wonderful
A miracle,
oh, it was beautiful,
magical.
And all the birds in the trees,
well, they'd be singing so happily
Oh joyfully,
oh playfully
watching me
But then they sent me away
to teach me how to be
sensible
Logical,
oh responsible,
practical
And then they showed me a world
where I could be so
dependable
Oh clinical,
oh intellectual,
cynical