I could die
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(10-11-2013, 02:16 PM)Malu Wrote:  102, you're fine. 104 is life threatening, 106 is when brain death begins, and of course 113 is nearly certain of death. You got some cushion room, I'm just kidding that is indeed very detrimental. I liked how you encompassed pretty much everything that comes with the standard flu in a simple way, no crazy metaphors about living on the sun, or disgusting details of being on the loo. I also enjoyed the rhyming. Thanks for the read.
Thanks Malu 106 is more like me Tongue Thanks for your time and comment. TOMH

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I could die - by Keith - 10-11-2013, 08:02 AM
RE: I could die - by Malu - 10-11-2013, 02:16 PM
RE: I could die - by Keith - 10-13-2013, 03:21 AM



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