10-12-2013, 03:33 AM
(10-12-2013, 03:29 AM)RyanRader13 Wrote: a bit of personification maybe fescribe the men as statues to topple , or an allusion to describe them, bring the hearth in the inn alive with its dancing tongues of flame, give the scene a domain, show the world you are trying to create, a little decription totally changes the colorOh.
Now I get what you are tellin' me.
Thanks.

