Blue dot

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10-12-2013, 03:29 AM

(10-03-2013, 06:38 AM)Sonata Wrote: I wrote "I love you" across my whole bodyRemove "whole"
just so you can see that I actually do.
I used a blue pen, and it seems it won't go away.Great opening

With every shower it slowly dissapears,
But there are still marks.Reword or delete this stanza

Today, there's just a small blue dot right bellow the belly,
And water in the shower is getting cold."And the water"? Typo?

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Blue dot - by Sonata - 10-03-2013, 06:38 AM

RE: Blue dot - by rowens - 10-03-2013, 07:47 AM

RE: Blue dot - by Malu - 10-06-2013, 02:02 PM

RE: Blue dot - by Sonata - 10-06-2013, 06:31 PM

RE: Blue dot - by Malu - 10-07-2013, 02:39 AM

RE: Blue dot - by Keith - 10-07-2013, 07:18 AM

RE: Blue dot - by jringo_ - 10-12-2013, 03:29 AM

RE: Blue dot - by RyanRader13 - 10-12-2013, 03:36 AM

RE: Blue dot - by Sonata - 10-12-2013, 08:31 AM

RE: Blue dot - by beaufort - 11-10-2013, 10:56 PM

RE: Blue dot - by rayheinrich - 11-11-2013, 05:28 AM

RE: Blue dot - by billy - 11-11-2013, 10:26 AM

RE: Blue dot - by tectak - 11-12-2013, 04:00 AM

RE: Blue dot - by killthepoet - 11-21-2013, 04:58 AM

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