Strike

[jringo_]

Roar and rumble, twist and turn,
loose the lightning’s pent-up burn.
Flash and flicker, dance and dive,
for an instant feel alive.LINE BREAK!

A flowing rhythm is created by the clauses in the first three lines, a nice palatable pattern. It's broken so haphazardly in the final line! I would suggest either putting a comma after "instant" to continue the pattern, or a line break after "instant" to break the pattern clearly. Lovely poem though!