RatBoy

[Malu]

Warning Explicit Language

RatBoy

You're ugly. You're stupid.
You ain't worth a fucking thing.
You're lowly, and putrid,
You'll never amount to anything.

You're worthless. You're wasteful.
Why do I even bother?
You're negative, and hateful,
You don't even have a father.

(You're spinning out of control
Get back in your hole,
and go do what you're told
or watch it burn your soul)


Ratboy, little Ratboy,
This is who I am I'm Ratboy.
Confuse me and abuse me
Everyone come and use me Use and abuse is a bit cliche, but it's not that bad, definitely ties into this

Break me, and rape me,
tell me how much you hate me
Beat me, and keep me,
Show me how you complete me


I'm tiny. I'm hideous.
And I'm such a fucking idiot
I hurt, and I hate me,
So nobody dares to save me

I'm silent, sick looking,
And I see you over there staring.
I'm loud. I'm crooked.
I had a chance but you took it.

(I'm spinning out of control,
I better get back in my hole,
and go do what I'm told,
Or watch it burn my soul)


Ratboy, little Ratboy,
This is who I am I'm Ratboy.
Confuse me and abuse me
Everyone come and use me

Aesthetic, pathetic,
My painted face just said it. I especially liked the first two lines of ths stanza
Come near me, Come smear me
Nothing matters to me.


I sit, and watch,
as everybody runs.
They run, away,
After promising to stay.

I'm empty. I'm useless.
Want to see me when I get ruthless?
Ain't broken, or heartless,
I'm weak but far from harmless Liked this line too


Ratboy, little Ratboy,
This is who I am I'm Ratboy.
Confuse me and abuse me
Everyone come and use me

I'll break you, I'll take you.
I'll show you how it feels.
I'll tear you, and scare you,
so push me again I dare you.

Hit me, slit my throat.
Don't you just want to own my soul?
Beat me, and keep me,
Show me how you complete me. This is a good line, very fitting to end with this


Thats all I had so far. please be hard on this one I really want to know the audience perspective or what I can do to change the effect to better suit my purpose. Don't be afraid to tell me if you think I'm nuts haha.
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I noticed your music genre is metal and alternative. This seems fairly dark to me. How do you sing it? Really hardcore screaming metal? Or alternative? I'm assuming more screaming metal. Definitely conveyed a lot of emotion, and I definitely don't have any doubts about the personal connection, I'm sure this is your story.