A Howl of a Night
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(10-11-2013, 08:54 AM)Erthona Wrote:  That's a fun description. You might want to change up the first line a little, as currently it is a perfect line of iambic tetrameter. I was expecting the rest of the poem to be the same, as it is such a regular line; it took me a second to get past it. Just a thought, I know this is in the fun section.


Dale
Thanks Dale! Glad you found it fun
I never highlight my flaws or deficits
Because none of that will matter when death visits
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A Howl of a Night - by Malu - 10-11-2013, 04:32 AM
RE: A Howl of a Night - by RyanRader13 - 10-11-2013, 05:53 AM
RE: A Howl of a Night - by Malu - 10-11-2013, 05:54 AM
RE: A Howl of a Night - by RyanRader13 - 10-11-2013, 05:59 AM
RE: A Howl of a Night - by Malu - 10-11-2013, 08:47 AM
RE: A Howl of a Night - by Erthona - 10-11-2013, 08:54 AM
RE: A Howl of a Night - by Malu - 10-11-2013, 09:15 AM
RE: A Howl of a Night - by FayandFire - 10-11-2013, 11:03 AM
RE: A Howl of a Night - by Malu - 10-11-2013, 11:19 AM



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