10-11-2013, 08:54 AM
That's a fun description. You might want to change up the first line a little, as currently it is a perfect line of iambic tetrameter. I was expecting the rest of the poem to be the same, as it is such a regular line; it took me a second to get past it. Just a thought, I know this is in the fun section.
Dale
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.