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Memory Garden
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10-11-2013, 05:57 AM
Angsty and well written, If it were done without the metaphor of the flower and the rain i feel it would be a bit cliche but it has an enjoyable twist, I like the meter though at times it got me a little dribbled but its not you its me. well done I got a great picture in my head through the whole thing
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Memory Garden - by tigrflye - 10-11-2013, 05:39 AM
RE: Memory Garden - by RyanRader13 - 10-11-2013, 05:57 AM
RE: Memory Garden - by tigrflye - 10-11-2013, 06:01 AM
RE: Memory Garden - by RyanRader13 - 10-11-2013, 06:08 AM
RE: Memory Garden - by Todd - 10-11-2013, 06:11 AM
RE: Memory Garden - by tigrflye - 10-11-2013, 07:11 AM
RE: Memory Garden - by jringo_ - 10-12-2013, 02:02 AM
RE: Memory Garden - by FractalPacifist - 10-12-2013, 02:33 AM
RE: Memory Garden - by tigrflye - 10-12-2013, 04:39 AM
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