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[Malu]

15 to start
A collision
Scatters around aimlessly?
2 down, one sound, one streak
Decisions, decisions

Eyes locked on a green blaze baize? Second definition of blaze, look it up " a white spot or stripe on the face of a mammal or bird." but obviously, given the context of this poem the second part of that isn't relative. So since this poem is about pool, I am clearly going for "stripes" if you couldn't tell from other clues.
I pounce
With unerring execution
Now stuck behind
The fatal infinity
The indirect approach seems best
Catching the unsuspecting
Scarlet with my serpentine

4 more bands Clue to suggest I am stripes
Then I can
Dance with the raven

A ray of sun catches my eye Clue to suggest I am stripes
I stare at it
Contemplating
A blind shot has been taken
The sun and jupiter spiral
How fitting that only the sun remains

No longer in my interest
I alter my attention
Focused on the cascade focussed "focused (also focussed)" that's right out of the dictionary my friend
As it falls
There stands
A well-rooted violet The cascade and violet are supposed to symbolize the blue and purple stripe balls, not the best examples of things with stripes, but given the above portion of the poem, I think that me going for stripes is apparent.
No matter
For it has been trampled

All that is between
Me and the raven
Is that pesky sun
There's no allies left there are Helpful catch, thanks
To make the sacrifice
This time

The light is quickly swallowed
Into a black hole
Nothing left but just you and me, raven
No more avoiding
No more hiding
No more running away
We both knew this moment was upon us

I hope you're ready
Because I'm sending you home now
Back to the shadows
Where you should have never crawled out from Yoda speaking Swedish. I'm not even sure what you mean by this, I could of sworn this was at least in English

Hi malu,
This is obviously a nonsense poem of the highest calibre and is to be commended. I see this as a completely transfixing dissertation on the metaphorical pool table...and the associated game-play. I am impressed by the almost imperceptible shift from bar-pool to the darker side of human deviation. Stunning.
Look, if It wasn't for the complete lack of punctuation, rhythm, rhyme, meter, syntactical competance and ability to check spelling it would be perfect. Please, don't take me seriously and I will reciprocate.
Best,
tectak

Don't worry, I won't I should of kept this nonsense in the for fun forum, but this helpful critique is exactly what I wanted!